I'm pretending to be Laurie Lee. Do you think I will get away with it?

if you wrote this, and Laurie didn't(I don't know him--but I will)--then he would be very proud of you. That first stanza was a killer--it takes the reader right in. Promise Lauries spirit you'll never stop writing---honestly one of the best I've ever seen on yahoo answers! Vivid rich imagery, and thought and it flows like the forest limbs flow to the forest floor. Great Job!!!---William